Novel Development Consultation: Get your book outline reviewed – Jericho Writers
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Expert feedback on your book outline

From £350
Get expert advice on your book outline before you get stuck into the writing. We’ll give you a 1,500-word report on what’s working and what’s not.
2 week turnaround

Get professional feedback on your book outline

One of the biggest challenges writers face is knowing whether their idea is strong enough to sustain a novel and stand out in a competitive market. The Novel Development Consultation is designed to help you answer that question before you invest months in drafting.

Ideal for writers in the planning stage or early stages of a first draft, this service provides expert feedback on a detailed 4,000 word book outline of  your manuscript or book idea. Suitable for fiction and non-fiction projects, and may be suitable for other projects, subject to reviewer availability.

You’ll receive in-depth feedback on structure, plot, character development, pacing, technical challenges, and market potential, helping you strengthen your concept, build a solid foundation for your novel, and move into the drafting process with confidence.

Need help writing your book outline?

Read our step-by-step guide to writing a book outline (with examples!)

Your book outline review will include

Download a sample report to see what your book outline review will look like.

Advice on your book outline

Receive a 1,500 word report from an expert on your book outline covering all major plot points, character arcs, inciting incidents and more.

Next steps for your manuscript

Your report will cover advice on technical hurdles you may come up against in the writing process, such as psychic distance or multiple points of view.

Advice on commercial potential

We’ll assess the commercial viability of your work, ultimately empowering you with the knowledge you need to get your book sold.

Work with one of our professional book editors

We’ve worked hard over 20 years to hand-pick our team of expert editors. Once you buy a novel development consultation, you can request to work with one of the following editors, or let our Writer Support Team match you with the editor that best fits your work. Our book editors specialise in trade fiction and non-fiction texts. They include traditionally published authors as well as publishing professionals such as literary agents and Big 5 publishers.

 

Our editors will never send cold emails on behalf of Jericho Writers offering editorial services. All legitimate communications from Jericho Writers will come from an email address ending @jerichowriters.com.

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Jon Curzon

Jon Curzon

Literary agent with Selby Howard Literary Agency

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  • Books
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Jon Curzon is a literary agent at Selby Howard Literary Agency., where he represents writers across fiction and non-fiction. Clients he has represented have been published in the UK, US, Germany, France, India, the Netherlands, South Korea, and Greece.

 

In addition to his agenting work, Jon has also worked as a freelance editor for literary consultancies and creative writing courses since 2015. His perspective as an agent allows him to precisely identify what’s working in your manuscript and what needs tweaking in order to take your work to the next level.

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  • Literary (including Book Club)
  • Memoir / Autobiography
  • Other narrative non-fiction
  • Upmarket commercial
  • Thrillers
  • Speculative
Holly Seddon

Holly Seddon

International bestselling author

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  • Books
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Holly is an international bestselling author. Her published books include Try Not to Breathe (Ballantine Books), Don’t Close Your Eyes (Ballantine Books), Love Will Tear Us Apart (Corvus), The Hit List (Trapeze), The Woman on the Bridge (Orion), The Short Straw (Orion), and 59 Minutes (Orion).

 

 

She is also a mentor and tutor on our Ultimate Novel Writing Programme.

 

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  • Contemporary
  • Literary (Including ‘bookclub’)
  • Crime/Thriller/Action
  • Women’s fiction
  • Romance
  • Speculative
Elinor Davies

Elinor Davies

Former literary agent

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  • Genres

Elinor Davies began her publishing career as a Literary Agent’s Assistant and later Associate Agent at one of London’s leading literary agencies, Madeleine Milburn Agency, where she specialised in building a list of adult fiction ranging from commercial through to upmarket.

 

Since then, Elinor has established herself as an editor and author mentor working with organisations such as Asian Women Writers, Literature Wales and various university creative writing courses to help authors shape their manuscripts and enter the agent querying process with confidence.

  • Contemporary
  • Literary (including bookclub)
  • Women’s fiction
  • Romance
  • Historical
  • Crime/Thriller/Action
Naomi Jones

Naomi Jones

Critically acclaimed children’s author

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  • Books
  • Genres

Naomi has over eight years’ experience working in children’s publishing. She began her career at Puffin (Penguin Random House) before moving to Orion, and then Hachette Children’s Group.

 

Naomi’s own books are published by HarperCollins, Penguin Random House, Oxford Children’s Books and Hachette Children’s Group in the UK and have been translated into 22 languages.

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  • Picture books
  • Children’s fiction
  • Young adult fiction
Liz Monument

Liz Monument

Author, editor and writing coach

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  • Books
  • Genres

Liz Monument is an author, writing all kinds of fiction including sci-fi, historical, and horror.

 

She believes that the mechanics of fiction are identical whether you’re writing literary, genre, or hybrids, and that the same principles can be applied to improve a manuscript regardless of its subject matter or style.

 

Liz’s experience as a tutor and mentor informs her approach to editing. She’s very supportive of newer writers, and has great knowledge of the foundations of writing craft.

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  • Historical
  • Science fiction
  • Contemporary
  • Literary (including bookclub)
  • Crime/thriller/action
  • Women’s fction
  • Romance
  • Fantasy
  • Young adult
  • Comic/satire
Gary Gibson

Gary Gibson

A leading sci-fi author

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  • Books
  • Genres

Gary Gibson is one of the UK’s leading authors of hard science fiction, space opera and post-apocalyptic fiction.

 

Gary Gibson has published sixteen science fiction novels with Pan MacMillan, Newcon Press and through his own imprint Brain in a Jar Books, including Stealing Light (2007), Extinction Game (2012) and Echogenesis (2021).

 

As an editor for Jericho Writers, he’s worked with several hundred unpublished as well as published authors. His speciality is sci-fi and fantasy, but he’s also worked with writers of horror, crime and post-apocalyptic fiction.

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  • Science fiction
  • Horror
  • Thriller
Sam Jordison

Sam Jordison

Author and co-director of Galley Beggar Press

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  • Books
  • Genres

Sam Jordison is an author and co-director at Galley Beggar Press, the award-winning indie press.

 

He has extensive editorial experience and knowledge of the book world – and has also been on the other side of the fence, having written several best-selling works of non-fiction, including the notorious Crap Towns series (Boxtree, Pan Macmillan), the best-selling I Spy for adults series, a book about Literary London (co-authored with Eloise Millar), political books like Enemies Of The People and The 10 Worst Of Everything.

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  • Literary
  • Contemporary
  • Non-fiction
  • Memoir
  • Comic/satire
  • Crime/thriller/action
  • Science fiction
Megan Collins

Megan Collins

Author and tutor

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  • Books
  • Genres

Megan Collins is the author of the psychological thrillers The Winter Sister (2019), Behind the Red Door (2020), The Family Plot (2021), Thicker Than Water (2023), and Cross My Heart (2025), all published by Atria/Simon & Schuster.

 

She has an MFA in Creative Writing, and teaches creative writing. She is also a tutor on the Jericho Writers Ultimate Novel Writing Programme.

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  • Thriller
  • Mystery
  • Horror
  • Women’s fiction
  • Romance
  • Speculative
  • Contemporary
Em Norry

Em Norry

Author and editor

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  • Books
  • Genres

Em Norry is a fiction and non-fiction MG/YA author, with her books being published by Scholastic, Puffin, Oxford University Press, Bloomsbury, and Hodder Education. She writes under both Em Norry and E. L. Norry.

 

Her books include Son of the Circus (2019, Scholastic), The Extraordinary Life of Nelson Mandela (2020, Puffin), Amber Undercover (2021, OUP), Football Legends #5: Lionel Messi (2021, Scholastic), Mary Prince (2022, Scholastic), Fable House (2023, Bloomsbury), Fable House: Heart of Fire (2024, Bloomsbury), and Runaways (2025, Bloomsbury).

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  • Children’s fiction
  • Middle grade fiction
  • Young adult fiction
  • Children’s non-fiction
  • Memoir
Clare Coombes

Clare Coombes

Literary agent with the Liverpool Literary Agency

  • Bio
  • Books
  • Genres

Clare Coombes is an author, editor and literary agent with over 15 years’ experience of writing and editing professionally. She is a co-founder of the first Liverpool-based literary agency. Clare is a published author of two novels, Definitions (2015) and We Are of Dust (2018).

 

Her experience spans the breadth of editorial services and includes work across a variety of forms including full fiction manuscripts, anthologies, non-fiction proposals and pitches for film and TV.

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  • Historical fiction
  • Women’s fiction
  • Crime/Thriller/Action
  • Contemporary
  • Literary (including Book Club)
  • Romance
  • Memoir / Autobiography
  • Other narrative non-fiction
  • Subject-led non-fiction
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Get expert feedback on your book idea in two weeks

Get detailed feedback on your novel’s premise, structure, characters and plot. Add a follow-up call to your report to discuss your editor’s feedback on the phone.*

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Novel Development Consultation

Get a 1,500 word report on your book outline
Receive balanced unbiased feedback on your book idea
Receive your report in two weeks
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Optional add-on: 30-minute follow-up call* with your reviewer

*Please note feedback sessions are optional and will be dependent on Reader/Editor availability. If a phone call is not possible, a suitable alternative will be offered.

What writers say about our editorial services

We’ve helped writers refine their manuscripts and achieve their goals for more than 20 years. Here’s what they say about our editorial services.

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The comments were insightful, and the reader had clearly taken time to engage with the outline, read it carefully and put real thought into the suggestions. In every case, the critiques seemed to me to be fair and well explained.

David T

Novel Development Consultation client

You kindly gave me some excellent feedback on the initial stages of my novel. Well, it’s “finished”, and I have been fortunate to have it shortlisted for the Wilbur Smith Foundation Award for Adventure novel of the year (unpublished).

Richard F

Opening Section Review client

Your comments on the random points of view in my opening paragraph left me stunned! I take all your advice gratefully, and all of the technical points like POV, tense, dialogue, etc., went straight on the to do list.

Steve K

Opening Section Review client

Thank you again for your encouragement and many brilliant suggestions for my Cuba novel. I found them very perceptive and incorporated them into another draft.

Marion D

Opening Section Review client

Thank you so much for thorough feedback, kind words and encouragement. It means a lot. I found your report very clear and it sparked many ideas

Aman K

Editorial client

I remain impressed by both the quality and the quantity of Liz’s work. Apart from the overall comments, she goes into such great detail, character by character, chapter by chapter, missing nothing.

Carmella A

Editorial client

I was also blown away with your encouragement and thoughtfulness. You have given me excellent advice on how to focus on not only the query and synopsis, but also the plot. I encourage other writers to use your service.

Milo P

Agent Submission Pack Review client

Thank you for your perceptive and incisive report. I’ve been desperate for help like this and so much wish that I had found Jericho Writers a few years ago.

Richard F

Editorial client

Very happy with the editing notes, it was just what I’d hoped for to move forward with my manuscript.

Helen V

Opening Section Review client

Kate [Rizzo]’s comments were very helpful. She made several suggestions for improvements which make sense. I can see how they would improve the narrative, especially in terms of characterisation and pacing. I am working my way through implementing them.

Adrienne T

Opening Section Review client

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Need more info before you decide?

Choosing the right service for your work is hard. But we’re on hand to help! Book a call with our Writer Support team at a time to suit you to talk through the options.

Frequently asked
questions

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Who will be giving the feedback? 

An experienced author or professional editor who best suits your writing project. We match our writers based on 20 years of experience working with industry professionals. We’ll consider their experience, genres of interest, and whether they themselves feel they are the right fit for your work.  

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Can I contact my reviewer directly? 

The standard service will not include direct contact with the reviewer, but their in-depth report will contain actionable advice for you to progress with your manuscript. If you would like more support, you can purchase an optional 30-minute phone call with your reviewer as an add-on, subject to availability. If a phone call cannot be completed, a suitable alternative will be offered.

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How long does it take? 

The turnaround is usually two weeks. 

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What genres do you accept? 

The Novel Development Consultation is most suitable for adult, young adult and middle grade fiction, and for narrative non-fiction/memoir. If you would be interested in purchasing this service for a project which does not fit into those categories (e.g. subject-led non-fiction), please contact us and we will check reviewer availability on your behalf. Unfortunately, this service is not suited for academic texts.

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Do I need to be based in the UK for this service? 

Not at all, our editorial services are delivered online and are suitable for writers from all around the world. 

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Can I work with my reviewer in a long-term capacity? 

Unfortunately, we cannot guarantee our reviewers have availability for long-term support. However, we do offer a range of services that can facilitate flexible long-term support for your writing, including mentoring or the Ultimate Novel Writing Programme. If you’d like to discuss your options, get in touch with a member of the team and we’ll talk through your potential next steps. 

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Can I get feedback on my manuscript too? 

The Novel Development Consultation will only focus on the outline of your novel. However, our range of editorial services can offer in-depth feedback on your work-in-progress from expert editors and literary agents. If you need help identifying which service is the one for your or if you’d like to discuss your choice of editor, book a call with our team – we’d be happy to help! 

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Can you help me find an agent? 

Yes, you can log onto Jericho Writers’ AgentMatch, our database of over 1,000 UK and US literary agents. 

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How do I contact the Jericho Writers team? 

If your question hasn’t been answered here, you can find more information via our Help Centre. If you’d like to speak to a member of the Jericho Writers’ team you have the option of booking a call, filling in our contact us form, or emailing us at info@jerichowriters.com. We’d love to hear from you, so do get in touch with any questions you might have!