Short Story Review: get insightful & actionable feedback – Jericho Writers
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Short Story Review

From £250
Get detailed editorial advice on your short story or short stories collection from a professional editor.
1-2 week turnaround time
Express service available

Get expert feedback on your short stories

Your short story review will provide feedback and advice on style, structure, pacing, characterisation, and more, alongside basic spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Your editor will offer support in tackling the next steps and addressing problem areas. You’ll have the opportunity to discuss the report directly with your editor once you received your copy. Regardless of whether you’re writing two or three stories, or if you’re working on a short story collection, each story will be looked at individually and addressed separately. Where appropriate, your editor will also view your stories as part of a collection, for example considering how they work together and their overall presentation.

Jericho Writers was founded by writers, for writers. Four of us are published by the Big 5, while others are deep in the writing process. We carefully select the editors we work with — we choose the kind of people we’d want to guide us in our own writing. It’s this approach that has helped authors move forward with confidence, launch their careers, sign with literary agents and become Sunday Times bestsellers.

Your short story review will include

Actionable feedback & advice

An expert editor will assess up to 50,000 words of your short stories/collection, providing feedback and advice on style, structure, pacing, characterisation, and more in a 1,500-2,500 word report. Your editor will give you clear steps to follow to resolve problem areas, with examples.

Advice on commercial potential

Your expert editor will assess the commercial viability of your work, whether you are entering competitions, submitting to magazines, journals, or anthologies, or publishing a collection of short stories.

Support from your book editor

After you receive your short story review, you’ll have the opportunity to clarify anything you’re unsure of with your editor via email before you begin polishing your work. If you’d like to continue to work with your editor, you have the opportunity to book post editorial support, exclusive to editorial clients.

Work with one of our professional book editors

You can request your dream editor or let our team match you with the editor best suited to your work. Our hand-selected team of expert book editors are specialists across trade fiction and non-fiction, and have worked with us for 20-years. Here you’ll find traditionally published authors as well as publishing professionals such as literary agents and editors with Big 5 publisher experience.

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Anastasia Parkes

Anastasia Parkes

Novelist & writing coach

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Anastasia Parkes is an author with multiple creative personae. As Anastasia she has published a short story collection (Stabbing the Rain, 2013), and writes ‘human interest’ articles for The Times, The Daily Mail, The Lady, and The Tablet.

She has written two novels under the pseudonym Maria Lucas: Daddy’s Girl (2016), and Loved Ones (2017).

As Primula Bond she is the successful author of the erotic romance Unbreakable trilogy: The Silver Chain (2013), The Golden Locket (2013) and The Diamond Ring (2014), published by HarperCollins.

Anastasia has an MA in English Literature. She has worked as a Jericho Editor for over ten years and has delivered several workshops on general short story techniques.

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Cecile Shanahan

Cecile Shanahan

Experienced editor &educator

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Cecile is an experienced editor and proofreader who adores helping writers to make their words shine. Since 2015, Cecile has worked with authors across a variety of fiction and non-fiction genres.

Cecile has tertiary qualifications in Professional Editing and Proofreading, Secondary Education, English Literature and Journalism.

Since joining Jericho Writers, she has assisted more than 20 authors to progress their writing projects through agent submission pack assessments, manuscript assessments, developmental edits, copy edits, line edits, proofreading and post-editorial support.

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Dexter Petley

Dexter Petley

Acclaimed novelist & memoirist

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Dexter Petley is an experienced editor, acclaimed literary novelist, memoirist and translator. As a long serving editor with Jericho Writers, (since 2005) many of Dexter’s clients have achieved considerable success in finding agents and publishers.

Dexter does not shy away from complex themes or influences. His expertise spans entire genres, from commercial book club to war fiction. He takes everything in his stride, turning his fastidious, but fair, eye to anything at hand – making you a better writer for it.

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Em Norry

Em Norry

Experienced author & editor

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Em Norry is a fiction and non-fiction MG/YA author, with her books being published by Scholastic, Puffin, Oxford University Press, Bloomsbury, and Hodder Education. She writes as Em Norry and E. L. Norry.

Her books include Son of the Circus (2019, Scholastic), The Extraordinary Life of Nelson Mandela (2020, Puffin), Amber Undercover (2021, OUP) and Fablehouse (2023, Bloomsbury).

She has had short stories published in the following collections: Home Again: Stories about Coming Home from War (2020, Scholastic), Happy Here (2021, Knights Of), The Place for Me: Stories from the Windrush (2021, Scholastic), A Very Merry Murder Club (2021, Farshore), The Super Sunny Murder Club (2024, Farshore).

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  • Plays and screen scripts
Jon Curzon

Jon Curzon

Literary Agent with Artellus Ltd

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Jon Curzon is a literary agent at Artellus Ltd., where he represents writers across fiction and non-fiction. Clients he has represented have been published in the UK, US, Germany, France, India, the Netherlands, South Korea, and Greece.

In addition to his agenting work, Jon has also worked as a freelance editor for literary consultancies and creative writing courses since 2015. His perspective as an agent allows him to precisely identify what’s working in your manuscript and what needs tweaking in order to take your work to the next level.

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  • Literary (including Book Club)
  • Comic/Satire
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  • Memoir / Autobiography
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Louise Tondeur

Louise Tondeur

Critically acclaimed &and poet

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Louise Tondeur is a writer of fiction, poetry, plays, and non-fiction. Her published works include two novels, The Water’s Edge and The Haven Home for Delinquent Girls (Headline Review), a short story collection called Unusual Places (Cultured Llama, 2018), and non-fiction writing guides.

Louise has an MA in Creative Writing, a PhD, and has worked as a Drama teacher and Creative Writing lecturer. She has supported countless writers with both written and verbal feedback, and brings her knowledge of theatre and creative writing into conversations with emerging writers.

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Pauline Kiernan

Pauline Kiernan

Critically acclaimed short story writer & playwright

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Dr Pauline Kiernan has been a literary consultant for 12 years and has taught Creative Writing on Oxford University’s Creative Writing Undergraduate and MA programmes.

She is the author of Screenwriting They Can’t Resist (2011) and is a theatre and film consultant. Her monographs, Shakespeare’s Theory of Drama (1996), and Staging Shakespeare at the New Globe (1999) were published to worldwide acclaim, and her best-selling Filthy Shakespeare: Shakespeare’s Most Outrageous Sexual Puns (2006) was an Observer Book of the Year.

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Richard Blandford

Richard Blandford

Author & literary consultant

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Mixing dark humour with scenarios both banal and fantastic, Richard Blandford has walked the line between the comic and the horrifying since 2004. He is the author of the Elvis impersonator novel Hound Dog (2007), the coming-of-age tale Flying Saucer Rock & Roll (2022), Whatever You Are Is Beautiful (2022) and My Life in Orbit (2024). He is also the author of the short story collections The Shuffle (2022) and Erotic Nightmares (2022).

His art survey London in the Company of Painters (2017) and was listed by Martin Gayford as one of the art books of the year in The Spectator, and a London book of the year in the Evening Standard.

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Why choose Jericho Writers?

Many companies promise to get your book published, but we only offer services we believe will genuinely benefit you. Unsure if this is the right fit? Book a call with us – we’ll be honest with you. This commitment to integrity has helped Jericho Writers thrive for over 20 years.

Jericho Writers’ Short Story Review

Other Providers

Feedback on entire short story collection and commercial potential
Detailed editorial report
1,500 to 2,500 word report
2 page summary
Opportunity to ask follow-up questions directly with your editor
Opportunity to book an additional, exclusive feedback session with your editor

Don’t take just our word for it…

We’ve been helping writers achieve their goals for over 20 years. Here’s what some of them have had to say:

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The MS critique I received from Jericho Writers was instrumental in my eventual offer of representation. The feedback lit a spark of ideas in me that meant I was able to overhaul the whole book in the right way to get an agent’s attention. I cannot recommend it highly enough.

Charlotte O

Manuscript Assessment customer

I couldn’t be more delighted with the results. My editor gave me so many amazing suggestions and some much needed

Allison M

Manuscript Assessment customer

You kindly gave me some excellent feedback on the initial stages of my novel. Well, it’s “finished”, and I have been fortunate to have it shortlisted for the Wilbur Smith Foundation Award for Adventure novel of the year (unpublished).

Richard F

Opening Section Review customer

Your comments on the random points of view in my opening paragraph left me stunned! I take all your advice gratefully, and all of the technical points like POV, tense, dialogue, etc., went straight on the to do list.

Steve K

Opening Section Review customer

Thank you again for your encouragement and many brilliant suggestions for my Cuba novel. I found them very perceptive and incorporated them into another draft.

Marion D

Opening Section Review customer

Thank you so much for thorough feedback, kind words and encouragement. It means a lot. I found your report very clear and it sparked many ideas

Aman K

Editorial client

I remain impressed by both the quality and the quantity of Liz’s work. Apart from the overall comments, she goes into such great detail, character by character, chapter by chapter, missing nothing.

Carmella A

Editorial client

I was also blown away with your encouragement and thoughtfulness. You have given me excellent advice on how to focus on not only the query and synopsis, but also the plot. I encourage other writers to use your service.

Milo P

Agent Submission Pack Review customer

Thank you for your perceptive and incisive report. I’ve been desperate for help like this and so much wish that I had found Jericho Writers a few years ago.

Richard F

Editorial client

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Could you be our next success story?

Over the last 20 years, many of our clients have gone on to win prizes, become bestsellers, get film and TV deals, achieve huge global sales, and more. To name a few, John David Mann went onto become a New York Times Bestselling author; Paul Braddon’s The Actuality has been optioned for a TV series; Eleanor Anstruther won the Desmond Elliott prize; and Nussaibah Younis has been shortlisted for The Women’s Prize awards. Now it’s your turn.

Claire Hatcher-Smith

Published by Farshore (HarperCollins)

R.S. Burnett

The Sunday Times’ best thrillers of 2025

S.J. King

Two book deal with Storm Publishing

Nussaibah Younis

Shortlisted for The Women’s Prize 2025

Anna Mazzola

Won the Edgar Allen Poe Award for Best Paperback in 2018

Adrienne Chinn

Two book deal from Avon Books

Dominic Brownlow

Published by Louise Walters Books

M.J. Camilleri

2023 Page Turner Writing Award finalist

Dr Martyn Pritchard

Published by Troubadour

Ian Siragher

Published by The Book Guild

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Frequently asked
questions

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Do I need to be based in the UK for this service? 

Not at all! Our editorial services are delivered online and are suitable for writers from all around the world. 

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How do I submit my short stories? 

Do you have a short story in need of a professional set of eyes? Here are the steps to follow to submit your short stories for our professional editing service: 

1) Select your word count in the box above (choose the one that matches your project’s total word count).

2) Click on “Add to basket” 

3) Once you’ve made your payment, you’ll be sent an email with a link. Click on this and you’ll be able to upload your manuscript for review.

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How should I format my manuscript? 

Please only upload Word documents via the online submission form. Don’t forget to number your pages and double space your lines, and use an easy-to-read font like Times New Roman 12.  

It’s also helpful for our editors if you make sure paragraphs are indented and use page breaks where needed throughout your manuscript. 

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How do you choose the editor? 

We match manuscripts based on over 20 years of experience working with our editors. We consider editor experience, their genres of interest, and whether they themselves feel they are the right fit for your work. All matches depend on editors’ availability.   

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Can I choose my editor? 

If you have a particular editor in mind, we will of course do our best to match you with them. We cannot guarantee this, however, as all of our editors are freelance and there are times when they are unavailable due to demand and/or other commitments. 

Once you have placed your order, you’re welcome to send a shortlist of 4-5 editors from our website. We’ll do our best to place you with one of your preferred choices. 

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How long will it take to match my manuscript with an editor? 

We aim to match you with the right editor within 2-4 days. We’ll get back to you as soon as the choice has been confirmed. 

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How long does it take to receive my editorial report? 

If you’ve ordered a standard editorial report, you can expect our team to deliver this around two weeks after they receive your manuscript.  

Express reports can be delivered in as little as one week. 

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Will I be able to discuss my report with my editor? 

Following your editorial report, there will be an opportunity to check in with your editor via email. At this stage, you are welcome to ask a few follow-up questions regarding your editorial report.

If you’d like to continue working with your editor on your short story, you could consider one-to-one mentoring. These are flexible, online sessions that can be tailored to your needs. Find out more about Mentoring here or get in touch with our Writer Support team. 

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Do the short stories need to be connected (e.g. from one collection)? 

Your short stories do not need to be connected, though it would be useful to include this information in your submissions form. For example, if your short stories are connected and you would like the editor to give feedback on how they work together, let us know. If your stories are not connected and you would like them to each one to be considered individually, that’s fine too, just make sure to include this information.