Going for 9k words

picking away at it word by work just short of 9k as we speak.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/12ErfZfmOlQxGK4haADVmzgDOMrl-JMdG6nBTJdh32co/edit

All can leave comments, and I find it easier to look through edits that way. If anyone feels like giving the rough draft a