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Jennifer
jenbray89
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Hi Katherine thanks for your feedback. I do know exactly what you are saying and I am at 86k words now. This post is the i troduction to the book and i have wondered if i nèded it mtself. The story does begin for real in chapter 2. There is lots of show don’t tell from there with much more detail. Perhaps I should weave the essence of the intro into the following chapter.
Thanks
Jen