Feedback for Book Blurb please?
Hello. I wonder if anyone might have time to look at the blurb for my novel. I thought I shouldn’t say what the genre is – hoping it would be obvious! This is my first novel and I’m close to indie publishing. Any feedback would be most appreciated. Thanks Catherine
When Bella McCaa is released from a decade of caring for her cruel and demanding mother, she can’t wait to return to London and pick up the threads of a once high-flying career.
But fate, and her relatives, intervene. Pushed out of the family home, penniless and in desperate need of a job, getting her life back in London is more difficult than Bella thought.
And just when Bella thinks she’s seen it all, Jem, the ex-love-of-her-life, strides into town. His arrival stirs up a tempest of emotions and reveals long buried secrets, shattering Bella’s view of the world and making her question everything.
Adding to the chaos, her body is determined to remind her she’s not just battling circumstance, but also going through a change that has her misfiring on all cylinders.
Can Bella negotiate a whirlwind ride of unexpected curveballs, love and second chances to find a happy every after on her own terms?
- This discussion was modified 4 months ago by Catherine Aitken. Reason: It all comes up on google when I look for my book title which I've now taken out