{"id":872554,"date":"2026-01-20T14:30:00","date_gmt":"2026-01-20T14:30:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/jerichowriters.com\/?p=872554"},"modified":"2026-01-20T14:10:59","modified_gmt":"2026-01-20T14:10:59","slug":"showing-not-telling-in-a-policing-world","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/jerichowriters.com\/showing-not-telling-in-a-policing-world\/","title":{"rendered":"Showing, not telling in a policing world"},"content":{"rendered":"\n

Ask any cop what the go-to insult of those hilarious people on a night out is and I\u2019ll bet you they reply with, \u2018Oink oink. Can anyone smell pork?\u2019 As you can imagine that splits their sides. So much so that they often ask the comedian to come and spend the night in their free bed and breakfast facility to reward their wit.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

As writers, we are always being told to \u2018show\u2019 through the senses. How do things sound, smell, feel, look, taste? The good news is that police stations and crime scenes are replete with stimulants to excite each sense, except maybe taste.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Immersing the reader<\/h2>\n\n\n\n

So, unless you\u2019ve been in the police or had the misfortune to grace the inside of a cell block, been victim or witness to a violent crime or worked in a mortuary, you might only be able to imagine the unique, gut wrenching smells that such workplaces emanate.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Take a cell block \u2013 or custody suite as they are sometimes pompously called. Who\u2019s resident behind the three inch green (or blue) steel doors? Well, you have drunks, vagrants, prisoners entering their third shower-less day, the incontinent (often deliberately so), the dirty protestors and just your average Joe whose fetid footwear stands sentry outside their cell. Add to that the whiff of cleaning fluid and the cremation of microwave ready-meals and you start to get an idea of just how violently the olfactory glands are assaulted.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

What about the sounds? It might come as a surprise that many prisoners don\u2019t just settle down quietly with a book and wait for their turn to be interviewed. Some like to remind the custody officers they are still there, sometimes in quite colourful terms. A few tenacious souls believe that if they punch, or headbutt, the metal door often enough they will break through to freedom. Unsurprisingly, their neighbours have a view about this constant racket and offer to rearrange the culprit\u2019s body parts the moment they meet. On a serious note, there are far too many people with mental health problems in police cells and the sounds of their distress can be heartbreaking.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

As well as the din created by the prisoners, custody staff often find it difficult to gently close the cell doors when a hefty slam seems far more satisfying. Their key-chains jangle at every move and police officers\u2019 radios squawk and bleat pretty much constantly.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

It\u2019s no less distinctive out at crime scenes. I remember, as a tender eighteen-year-old recruit arriving to the report of a man being beaten half to death behind some shops in Bognor Regis. As we stepped out of the car, I asked my tutor what that smell was. \u2018Get used to it son, it\u2019s the cocktail of death.\u2019 Luckily this chap did not die but the aroma still lingered. The blend of blood and alcohol produces a sickly sweet, yet ferrous, smell. It\u2019s quite distinctive but strangely not that unpleasant. Don\u2019t get me wrong, I wouldn\u2019t buy it as a fragrance but it\u2019s not as revolting as the cell block or, worse still, the lung-lingering stench of a decomposing body or the odours a body wafts during a post mortem.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Applying this to characters<\/h2>\n\n\n\n

If your protagonist is a police officer then never forget they are human beings. Both of my non-fiction books deliberately depict what it feels like to police certain incidents. Cops experience fear, dread, pain and PTSD the same as everyone else. They also have to show gargantuan restraint (imagine interviewing a child rapist and keeping your anger in check), stem the giggles and turn to gallows humour to get through the day. You will want your readers to really care about your characters so showing these states, maybe through \u2018close point of view\u2019, is essential. Don\u2019t be afraid for them to cry, get angry or make mistakes as, after all, aren\u2019t these the symptoms of stress and isn\u2019t that great to put your characters through? I\u2019m often accused of subjecting my fictional protagonist Chief Superintendent Jo Howe to the most dreadful jeopardy, but that\u2019s the point!<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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