{"id":118,"date":"2020-11-10T16:13:28","date_gmt":"2020-11-10T16:13:28","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/jerichowriters.com\/?p=118"},"modified":"2025-05-09T20:41:23","modified_gmt":"2025-05-09T19:41:23","slug":"show-dont-tell","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/jerichowriters.com\/show-dont-tell\/","title":{"rendered":"Show, Don&#8217;t Tell: What It Means And Why It Matters"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p><meta charset=\"utf-8\">\u201cShow, Don\u2019t Tell\u201d is one of the oldest pieces of advice to new writers, but it can be kinda confusing without some show and tell examples. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>What exactly is the difference between Showing and Telling? Is \u201cShowing\u201d&nbsp;<em>always<\/em>&nbsp;right? And is Telling&nbsp;<em>always<\/em>&nbsp;wrong?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>As we\u2019ll see, \u201cShow, Don\u2019t Tell\u201d is good advice&nbsp;<em>in certain circumstances<\/em>. Not just good advice, in fact, but absolutely essential to any half-decent novel.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>At the same time, virtually every novel ever written contains passages that are told, not shown . . . and that\u2019s fine. You just have to understand which mode of writing to use where.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>These things get confusing when spoken about in the abstract, so we\u2019ll use plenty of showing vs. telling examples to show you exactly what\u2019s what.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Sounds good? 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Rather than telling readers what\u2019s happening, authors use this technique to show drama unfold on the page. \u2018Telling\u2019 is factual and avoids detail; while \u2018showing,\u2019 is detailed and places the human subject at the centre of the drama.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"Show,-Don\u2019t-Tell:-What-This-Actually-Means\">Show, Don\u2019t Tell: What This Actually Means<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\u2018Don\u2019t&nbsp;<strong>tell<\/strong>&nbsp;me the moon is shining.&nbsp;<strong>Show<\/strong>&nbsp;me the glint of light on broken glass,\u2019 Anton Chekhov once advised.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Here\u2019s an example of what he means:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">\n<p><strong>Telling:<\/strong><br>The night was cold and moonlit. The sleigh moved fast through the forest.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Showing:<br><\/strong>Ekaterina was shocked by the cold. She\u2019d known winters before, but never this far north and never this deep. Burrowed under furs as she was, she still felt her eyelashes freeze. There were crystals of ice on her face where her own breath had frozen solid. It was a clear night, and they raced through the whispering pines, like a feather drawn over a sheet of silver.&nbsp;It seemed magical. Impossible. Temporary. Forbidden.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>What do you notice?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>You\u2019ll instantly notice a number of things here.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"h-how-to-recognise-the-telling-mode\"><strong>How To Recognise The \u201ctelling\u201d Mode<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Any piece of prose written in the \u201ctelling\u201d mode:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>Is factual.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Is brief.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Is an&nbsp;<em>efficient<\/em>&nbsp;way to communicate data.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Prefers to avoid detail, and is happy to convey broad overarching messages. (\u201cIt was cold.\u201d)<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Is not necessarily human-centred, and as a result&#8230;<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Does not, in general, stir the heart.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"h-how-to-recognise-the-showing-mode\">How To Recognise The \u201cshowing\u201d Mode<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Any piece of prose written in the \u201cshowing\u201d mode:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>Is human-centred (usually, though sometimes only by implication).<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Is a slower, richer, more expansive way to communicate.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Is not efficient \u2013 quite the reverse!<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Loves detail.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Tends to place the human subject right at the centre of things, and as a consequence&#8230;<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Can often stir the heart.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"h-an-example-of-showing-vs-telling-from-literature\">An Example Of Showing Vs Telling From Literature<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>You want an example of showing story from literature? OK, try this:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">\n<p><strong>Telling<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>The parties were dazzling and opulent. They spilled out of the house, into the&nbsp; garden and even the beach. [That\u2019s my version of how a \u201ctelling\u201d version might go.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Showing<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>In his blue gardens men and girls came and went like moths among the whisperings and the champagne and the stars. \u2026 The last swimmers have come in from the beach now and are dressing up-stairs; the cars from New York are parked five deep in the drive \u2026 floating rounds of cocktails permeate the garden outside \u2026 the lights grow brighter as the earth lurches away from the sun, and now the orchestra is playing yellow cocktail music, and the opera of voices pitches a key higher.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>You want to guess which method Scott Fitzgerald used to describe the parties in&nbsp;<em>The Great Gatsby<\/em>? I\u2019ll give you a clue: it wasn\u2019t the first of those ways.<\/p>\n\n\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"h-an-extended-example-of-telling-vs-showing\">An Extended Example Of Telling Vs Showing<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>One more example \u2013 this one a little bit more extended. The example here comes from my own book,&nbsp;<a href=\"http:\/\/www.harrybingham.com\/the-deepest-grave\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\"><em>The Deepest Grave<\/em><\/a>, which I\u2019ve chosen just to make the point that these rules and disciplines apply to all of us. To Scott Fitzgerald. To me. To you.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>So, here\u2019s one more example, as before given in in two possible versions.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">\n<p><strong>Telling<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Bowen, Katie and FIona find a sheet of vellum in an old Welsh church.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Showing<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Bowen lifts the 1953 fish-restaurant newspaper out of the wooden wall box.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u2018I suppose that can go.\u2019<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>He looks glumly at the mess behind the cupboard, knowing that it\u2019ll be his job to clean it. Katie looks into the box, now missing its newspaper floor.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Glances once, then looks more sharply.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u2018No, that\u2019s not right,\u2019 she says, and starts picking at the bottom with a fingernail.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I already looked under the newspaper and saw just the pale, bleached colour of old pine \u2013 pine that has never seen the sun \u2013 but that was me being dumb. Me not knowing how to see.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Katie picks at the bottom and it comes away.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>A sheet of paper, blank on the upper side, but with writing in clear purplish-black ink on the lower. Latin text. A hard-to-read medieval hand.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>I\u2019ve given you quite an extended chunk of \u2018showing\u2019 here because quoting at length makes a few further points very clear.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>As well as everything we\u2019ve said so far,&nbsp;<strong>Showing:<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li><em>Is dramatic<\/em>&nbsp;\u2013 it\u2019s story told as drama. You could actually imagine the long-form version of the scene above as something played out on a stage or in a movie. Literally every time that you could imagine a piece of writing as a stage or movie play, you are reading something that is shown not told.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><em>Often involves dialogue<\/em>. It\u2019s no coincidence. Movies involve actors saying their lines \u2013 and again, literally every time you encounter proper dialogue in a book, you are reading a scene that is shown, not told. In the example above, the characters immediately started talking about what they had found, thus emphasising the dramatic quality of the moment.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><em>Plays out in real time<\/em>. Take a look one more time at those two passages just above. The first \u2013 basically \u201cthree people find vellum\u201d \u2013 isn\u2019t real time at all. There\u2019s no sense of elapsed time there at all. It\u2019s told like a news report on CNN or the BBC. In the extended passage \u2013 the one from my actual book \u2013 you could imagine a clock on the wall, counting out the seconds as the scene&nbsp; elapsed. If you had to make a guess at how long it took from Bowen fishing out the newspaper to Katie finding the vellum, you could actually make a reasonable guess.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>These thoughts lead us to the next massive point you have to know about the whole showing \/ telling thing:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Namely, why people get so obsessed by it.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image is-resized\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/jerichowriters.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/paint-letterbox-kraken.jpg\" alt=\"show don't tell why it matters\" style=\"width:833px\"\/><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"Show,-Don\u2019t-Tell:-Why-It-Matters\">Show, Don\u2019t Tell: Why It Matters<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>People get obsessed with showing vs telling. Here\u2019s the reason why.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>OK. Here\u2019s a question for you:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Why do readers read books?<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>That\u2019s a real question, and you should think about your answer.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>If you think about it, you\u2019ll probably give me some answer like:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Readers want to get involved in a story.<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>They want to experience emotion through the lives and adventures of fictional characters.<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>They want to get swept up in other people\u2019s dramas.<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>And yes. Exactly.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>And to immerse ourselves in the experiences of those characters, we need to feel them as the characters themselves feel them \u2013 which is real time, minute by minute<\/em>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>That\u2019s the whole deal right there.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>If you want to get your readers emotionally engaged, you have to plunge them into the drama of the moment. It would be no good Jane Austen&nbsp;<em>telling us<\/em>&nbsp;that \u201cD\u2019Arcy proposed to Lizzy Bennet and Lizzy said no.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>The whole reason we read&nbsp;<em>Pride &amp; Prejudice<\/em>&nbsp;is to be with Lizzy as she experiences that first (awful) proposal. To feel her emotions and reactions almost second by second as she goes through that scene.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Readers always experience the closest emotional contact with their character during scenes that are shown, rather than via facts that are simply reported.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>As a matter of fact, I don\u2019t particularly like the \u201cShow, Don\u2019t Tell\u201d mantra for two reasons, the first of which is that Henry James phrased the whole thing better:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u201cDramatise! Dramatise! Dramatise!\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>That\u2019s so easy and so clear. If you have a patch of writing that seems a little low energy \u2013 a little blank, a little dull \u2013 then just let those commandments echo in your head.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Those dramatic scenes are all, always, shown not told.&nbsp;Those scenes are what keep your readers reading your novel. Your novel should be formed almost completely of such scenes.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>By this point, you\u2019re probably thinking, \u201cAh, OK, I\u2019ve got this. I see why this is so important. I gotta remember&nbsp;<em>never<\/em>&nbsp;to tell story, and&nbsp;<em>always<\/em>&nbsp;to show story.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>And that\u2019s what some people think. And what some writing tutors teach.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>And they\u2019re all wrong. 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It\u2019s the way we plunge our readers into the drama of our<a href=\"https:\/\/jerichowriters.com\/the-power-of-story-and-discourse\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\"> story<\/a>. It\u2019s our basic method for getting them to&nbsp;<em>experience<\/em>&nbsp;the emotions of our characters.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>And that\u2019s all true. But right at the start of this post, I also said:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Telling<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li>Is factual.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Is brief.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Is an efficient way to communicate data.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>And hold on \u2013 those things can be good as well as bad, right?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>So, sure, if we have some crucial scene \u2013 D\u2019Arcy proposing to Lizzy Bennet, or my gang of Bowen, Katie and Fiona finding some vellum in a church \u2013 then you have to show that scene, not merely report the action.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>But let\u2019s say, you have a line in your book that says:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">\n<p>\u201cYears passed and during that time Yulia hardly ever thought of the incident again. It was gone. It belonged in some past life,to some past self. She was busy now with other things. Only then, one bright, clear day in March . . .\u201d<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>That\u2019s telling, right? It\u2019s the narrator just reporting stuff, not showing it.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>And according to the \u201cShow, Don\u2019t Tell\u201d mantra, telling is bad.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>But It Isn\u2019t!<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>What is telling? Telling is the wrong way to deliver dramatic scenes (which should, of course, compose the vast bulk of your novel),&nbsp;<em>but it can be great way to deliver information that is essential to your story, but of no great dramatic consequence<\/em>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>So take that \u201cyears passed\u201d passage above. How would you even go about showing all that? Would you really have Yulia waking up day after day, month after month, and year after year, NOT thinking about whatever that past incident was?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Sure, that would be showing not telling . . . but you\u2019d be crazy to do it that way.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>The truth here is pretty simple:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>If you have essential factual information to deliver, and that information has no dramatic interest in its own right,&nbsp;then just tell it. Don\u2019t try to show it, because you\u2019ll slow your book right down \u2013 and probably kill it<\/em>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Showing is for drama (and your book should be mostly drama.)<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Telling is for the efficient delivery of all the non-dramatic information your book requires.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>The way I usually think about it is that my dramatic scenes are the stones in my wall, but for the wall to hold together, to be intact, it needs a little bit of mortar too. 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Use Dialogue<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Dialogue always delivers a scene that shimmers with life and emotional movement. (Especially when you&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/jerichowriters.com\/writing-dialogue\/\">write dialogue<\/a>&nbsp;right, of course!) What\u2019s especially great about dialogue is that it makes the reader decode the speaker\u2019s true meaning in exactly the same way that we have to decode it in real life.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>So if a character says, \u201cYes, I\u2019d absolutely love that,\u201d they probably mean that they\u2019d love it \u2026 but if it\u2019s a macho guy being invited to get work experience in a make-up boutique, you would probably guess that he\u2019s being sarcastic.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>That\u2019s a pretty clumsy example, of course, but the gaps between what a character says and what they really mean can feel really alive to the reader. (And a lot of fun for the writer, too.)<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"h-2-punctuate-your-scene-with-actions\">2. Punctuate Your Scene With Actions<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Some scenes will punctuate themselves with action very naturally. If you are writing a high intensity scene, such as a battle scene for example, your scene will be naturally studded with big, dramatic activity. But almost all books will have plenty of less action-intense scenes. So, for example, you might have a big corporate meeting in some glossy boardroom. The events being discussed might have huge consequences for your characters and your story \u2026 but there\u2019s no onrush of dramatic activity. No cities being set on fire. No Vikings with swords. No car chases. No nothing.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>But you still have to include actions<\/em>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>If you don\u2019t the scene will start to float away from the characters and seem unreal, without anchor. How do you show your story in this instance? What you need to do is insert actions anyway. You actually need to engineer something to punctuate the scene.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>So yes, getting up, turning pages, pouring coffee, looking out at the view \u2013 all those things count and help \u2014 somewhat.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>But maybe the corporate mogul at the heart of the action could at some point get angry. Hurl a coffee cup at a wall. Start shredding a binder full of company documents. Those things wouldn\u2019t count for much if you were writing an action-adventure book, but for the kind of scenes you\u2019re talking about, they deliver exactly what you need.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Short message: all scenes need actions, and those actions need to be suited to your place, your characters, and the kind of story you\u2019re writing. Vikings with swords for one kind of book, thrown coffee cups for another.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"h-3-exploit-your-physical-setting\">3. Exploit Your Physical Setting<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Actions and dialogue help, because they help keep your characters alive on the page \u2013 and alive in the mind of the reader.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>For much the same reason, great&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/jerichowriters.com\/how-to-write-descriptions-and-create-a-sense-of-place\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">descriptions of place<\/a>&nbsp;help as well. They anchor everything that\u2019s happening in the scene. That anchoring means that the stuff you\u2019re describing feels like real things happening to real place&nbsp;<em>in a real location<\/em>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Now, I\u2019m not for a moment suggesting that you need to write whole pages of purple prose talking about the wind in the palm trees, or whatever else. What I am saying is that you need a paragraph or so to locate the action relatively early in the scene \u2026 and then you need to keep nudging the reader to remind them where you are.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>So let\u2019s say your scene is taking place in a rainy New York garden. You\u2019d have two or three sentences setting the scene. (Let\u2019s say: iron railings, rain, noise of police sirens, a sad-looking willow tree, smells and steam coming from the back of a Chinese laundry opposite.) Then you start to let your scene unfurl and, as the characters move and talk and act, you drop in little sentences like, \u201crain dripped from the willow.\u201d or \u201cShe paused to let the howl of a nearby siren pass down the street.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>You\u2019re not interrupting the action. You\u2019re just helping the reader actually visualise it.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"h-4-make-use-of-your-character-s-physicality\">4. Make Use Of Your Character\u2019s Physicality<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>In the example just given, I suggested that you might write \u201crain dripped from the willow.\u201d And, good, that\u2019s perfectly fine.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>But let\u2019s bring your character right into that rainy garden, shall we? So you might have something like this:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">\n<p>\u201cRain dripped from the willow. Her hair was getting soaked but he couldn\u2019t help noticing that she seemed barely aware of it. And this was Esmee. Esmee who was normally so conscious of the tiniest bit of discomfort or, as she put it, \u2018outdoor horribleness.\u2019<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>That\u2019s effective writing, because you have the physical location and the character interacting \u2013 and interacting to a specific emotional \/ story purpose. In this case, that purpose is to emphasise that Esmee is so taken aback by the events of the scene (whatever those are), she\u2019s stopped noticing stuff that would normally really bother her.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>The short moral: use your characters\u2019 body and physical sensations to make them physically present and alive in your scene.<br><\/p>\n\n\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"h-5-use-specific-words-not-generic-ones\">5. Use Specific Words, Not Generic Ones<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Another easy win here.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>If you are trying to locate a scene in a place that feels real, you want to get specific rather than generic.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>So \u201crain dripped from the tree\u201d feels blandly universal. \u201cRain dripped from the willow\u201d feels already more specific and immediate.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Sometimes, of course, you\u2019ll want to get really specific. Something like this maybe: \u201crain dripped from the willow\u2019s long, drooping tendrils. She noticed that the tree was balding, losing leaves, as though unhappy to be here. As though longing for escape.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I don\u2019t want to suggest you always need to be that specific \u2013 sometimes it\u2019s fine for a willow to just be a willow \u2013 but in this case, some specific comments about a tree rebound back to hint something about what the character\u2019s might be feeling.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Short moral: always prefer the specific to the generic. And sometimes, if it makes sense, you can get&nbsp;<em>very<\/em>&nbsp;specific.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"h-6-always-make-space-for-the-reaction-shot\">6. Always Make Space For The Reaction Shot<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>You know how in the movies, you\u2019ll always get the reaction shot? LIke this, I mean:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Beat 1<\/strong>: \u201cI don\u2019t want to marry you,\u201d she said. \u201cI never did.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Beat 2<\/strong>: Close up of the guy\u2019s face<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>And it\u2019s kind of obvious why you have those rhythms. If you don\u2019t have the reaction shot, you\u2019ve lost a lot of the drama from the action of beat 1. You need both.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>And it\u2019s the same with novels. Sometimes, you\u2019ll need a whole paragraph describing a reaction. Sometimes you\u2019ll leave it to dialogue. Sometimes you\u2019ll make do with hints, but leave plenty of scope for creative ambiguity. And any of those routes (depending on the situation, depending on your story) are fine. What\u2019s not fine is to leave the action without a reaction.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Short moral: always include the reaction shot! Easy.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\" id=\"h-7-don-t-be-rushed-let-readers-feel-the-beats\">7. Don\u2019t Be Rushed: Let Readers Feel The Beats<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>FInal ninja tip of all-out showing &amp; telling awesomeness:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Don\u2019t rush.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Yes, you want to write a compelling and dramatic scene. Yes, you may have your heart set on a whole long action sequence with plenty of gunplay and chase scenes and whatever else.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>But let the reader enjoy it! Let them savour the moment!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Don\u2019t say, \u201cthe car was out of control. The car careened downhill and struck Damon on the hip, smashing him to the floor.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>That\u2019s OK, but where\u2019s the time to savour anything? The lovely thing about this moment is that Damon notices the car is out of control and he\u2019s right in the firing line.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>What does he think? What does he do? What does he feel?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I don\u2019t know, because this author hasn\u2019t told us. It\u2019s slower, yes, but it\u2019s actually more exciting to tease out that moment in more detail:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\">\n<p>The car was clearly out of control. Damon could just about see a driver but there was something about the curve of his shoulders, the loll of his head, which suggested the driver had lost consciousness, or worse. The fall of the hill put Damon right in the firing line. He remembered thinking, \u201cI\u2019m going to be hit. I need to move aside.\u201d He probably took the very first part of that action too. Some sideways move. Some break for shelter. But \u2026\u201d<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>And so on. You can see that by slowing the action down you\u2019ve actually ramped the excitement up. Pretty good, huh? And fun to write, every single damn time.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>That\u2019s it from me. Have fun with the showing &amp; telling. Do it right, and your scenes will come alive, and you\u2019ll enjoy writing them too.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Happy writing!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<hr class=\"wp-block-separator has-css-opacity\"\/>\n\n\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>\u201cShow, Don\u2019t Tell\u201d is one of the oldest pieces of advice to new writers, but it can be kinda confusing without some show and tell examples. What exactly is the difference between Showing and Telling? Is \u201cShowing\u201d&nbsp;always&nbsp;right? And is Telling&nbsp;always&nbsp;wrong? As we\u2019ll see, \u201cShow, Don\u2019t Tell\u201d is good advice&nbsp;in certain circumstances. 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